Argumentative essay

Why people shouldn't do plastic surgery

 People should not do plastic surgery just for their better appearances. Here are the reasons why I claim like this.

 The first reasons why people shouldn't do plastic surgery is that it costs a lot to do. Plastic surgeons commercialize plastic surgery to earn more money. They get a lot of money when they do plastic surgery, and use cheap materials during the surgery. They deceive people who want to do it and earn a lot of money. People spent prohibitive money on plastic surgery and get financial burden.

 The second reason is that plastic surgery remove people's individuality. Today, many people, especially many entertainers do plastic surgery to make their appearances attractively. They make their big eyes, prominent nose, small and narrow face, and slim body. This makes peoples appearances similar. They can't achieve recognition to their individuality. Also, there are many people who are famous not in their good appearances, but in their special individuality. We should not just concentrate in our better appearance.

 The third reason is that plastic surgery can cause harmful side effects. Unnnecessary surgeries can make bad influence to people's health. When they do liposuction, they get harmful bruise and pain. When they make their chins narrower, they get enormous pain because they remove their bones. When they double eyelid surgery, which is the easiest of plastic surgeries, they also get harmful pain. Also, people can be addicted to plastic surgery because human has endless greed. For example, when they fix their eye, they also want to fix their nose, and when they fix their nose, they also want to fix their forehead, chin, cheek..etc. Like this way, people can be addicted to plastic surgery.

 The last reason is that we should concentrate more in our ability than appearance. Many people choose plastic surgery to survive in lookism society. But they should not choose plastic surgery. For example, people do plastic surgery to make their first impression better enter a company. But they will get in trouble when they company finds other people who have better appearances. Their ability is more important. They have to concentrate in making their ability better.

 Therefore, people shouldn't do plastic surgery to make their appearances better because of these four reasons.