Argumentative essay

Why people shouldn't do plastic surgery

 People should not do plastic surgery just for their better appearances. Here are the reasons why I claim like this.

 The first reasons why people shouldn't do plastic surgery is that it costs a lot to do. Plastic surgeons commercialize plastic surgery to earn more money. They get a lot of money when they do plastic surgery, and use cheap materials during the surgery. They deceive people who want to do it and earn a lot of money. People spent prohibitive money on plastic surgery and get financial burden.

 The second reason is that plastic surgery remove people's individuality. Today, many people, especially many entertainers do plastic surgery to make their appearances attractively. They make their big eyes, prominent nose, small and narrow face, and slim body. This makes peoples appearances similar. They can't achieve recognition to their individuality. Also, there are many people who are famous not in their good appearances, but in their special individuality. We should not just concentrate in our better appearance.

 The third reason is that plastic surgery can cause harmful side effects. Unnnecessary surgeries can make bad influence to people's health. When they do liposuction, they get harmful bruise and pain. When they make their chins narrower, they get enormous pain because they remove their bones. When they double eyelid surgery, which is the easiest of plastic surgeries, they also get harmful pain. Also, people can be addicted to plastic surgery because human has endless greed. For example, when they fix their eye, they also want to fix their nose, and when they fix their nose, they also want to fix their forehead, chin, cheek..etc. Like this way, people can be addicted to plastic surgery.

 The last reason is that we should concentrate more in our ability than appearance. Many people choose plastic surgery to survive in lookism society. But they should not choose plastic surgery. For example, people do plastic surgery to make their first impression better enter a company. But they will get in trouble when they company finds other people who have better appearances. Their ability is more important. They have to concentrate in making their ability better.

 Therefore, people shouldn't do plastic surgery to make their appearances better because of these four reasons.

Drabble

History Presentation

 Students become very sad when they hear about the history presentation. They choose their topic, do research, and practice it. It looks boring.

 On Wednesday, they go to the classroom. There is no Mr.Ganze! But then they become depressed.

 "Why Mr. Ganze is sitting over there?"

 After Mr.Ganze comes, their presentation speed become very slow because of his critical comments.

 Students do presentation in their order. They do presentation in about 5 minutes, but when Mr.Ganze comments to them, it takes about 15 minutes to finish.

 They still have to do 2 more presentations. They hate history presentation because of him.

Diamante poem

Day

Cold   Noisy

Eating   Studying   Exercising

Breakfast   Lunch   Dinner   Bread

Resting   Studying   Sleeping

Warm   Quiet

Night

Response essay

A response essay about a movie 'Brave'


I watched a movie named 'Brave' during the self-study period. A girl named Merida, her mom Elinor, her dad, a witch, and many other people appear in this movie. I'm going to write my feeling after watching this movie.

Merida becomes a princess because his dad fought against a huge bear. But Merida is not very happy. She wants to live freely, but Elinor regulates her a lot and wants Merida to act live a real princess. Once, they fight because of Merida's marriage. Merida cut a cotton drawn her family, and Elinor burns her bow. Merida runs away from the castle. She unexpectedly finds a witch's house and gets some cake that can change her mother and change her fate. She comes back to home and makes her mom eat the cake. Then her mom changes into a bear. Merida was very nervous because she didn't intend to change her mom into a bear. Her dad wants to catch Elinor because she is a bear, so Merida and Elinor get out of the castle.

Merida and Elinor find the witch's house again, but there is no witch and only a sentence that the witch left. They listens it, but they can't understand what it means and become disappointed. But in the next morning, Merida finally understands its meaning. It said that they have to connect the cotton and put it on Elinor's body. So they come back to the castle to find the cotton ,return Elinor into a human, and solve the problem.

But the way they solve the problem isn't easy. They success to go into the castle, but unfortunately Elinor is found by a person, and she is chased by her husband and other people. Merida notices that her mom is in danger and looks for her. Elinor is caught by her husband, ahd he wants to kill her. Luckily, Merida finds Elinor and stands in front of Elinor to block her dad to kill Elinor. But the real bear which fought with her dad in the past comes to them and Merida runs into danger. Elinor fights against the bear to rescue Elinor. She successes it, and Merida puts the cotton on Elinor's body. But she doesn't change into a human again. Elinor becomes very sad and starts crying. Then Elinor returns into a human narrowly before the next sunrise. They learn their love again and become happy again. I think it was impressive.

The lesson of this movie is that we should change our fate ourselves, not by other people, and we should have a sense of responsibility when we do something. I think this movie was a little childish and boring. Its characters and substance was childish, and the conclusion was predictable. Anyway, I was happy that I could watch the movie during the self-study period and didn't have to study.

Ode to EOP

Dear EOP,


I was furious when I saw that you exist on the GLPS website.
How can I keep it? How can I accept this situation?
I started hating you as soon as I saw about you.


I was very sad when I heard that I have to keep you in KMLA building.
How can I keep it any time? How can I keep it in dormitory?
I was concerned that it will be very hard.

What should I do not to be caught? What should I do to not get an EOP paper?
There is now answer. I got an EOP paper on Monday.
I hate EOP. I hate EOP paper very much.


I'm always concerning if I get caught because of EOP violation.
I'm always concerning to speak because I might speak Korean unconsciously.
I hate EOP. I hate EOP paper very much.


You are the most craziest policy in the world.
Why do I have to keep you? How can I keep you for 18 days more?
I might get in trouble because I can't keep you for the rest of the days.
I will curse you everyday.


Your everlasting enemy,
Choi Yun Sun

My Goals

I have three things that I want to achieve during this camp.
First, I want to wake up early in the morning.
I'm going to sleep early in the previous day, and I'll wake up fast when I hear the morning bell.
Also, I'm going to prepare for the first class after I wake up.
Second, I want to have meals regularly.
To achieve this, I won't eat too much snacks first.
I will put many kinds of foods in my plate, and I won't remain foods after eating.
Third, I'm not going to play cellphone games.
I will concentrate in studying. I won't use my cellphone a lot, I won't use my cellphone not to call or write text messages.
I can't ensure that I could keep this, but I wish I could do this..

Self-Introduction

Hello. I want to introduce myself.
My mane is Yunsun and I and 15 years old now. I go to Seocho middle school.
I have a younger brother and a grandmother.
I go to English and math academy five times a week.
I have three kinds of pets in my house : birds, fish, and shrimps.
I went to GLPS to improve my English skills.
I wish I will be able to speak English more frequently after this camp.
Nice to meet you. Bye.